Friday, May 2, 2008

i got your scratch tracks today, micah. did you hear them yet, jesse? anyway, i really liked the first song a lot. especially the 1st verse, the chorus, and the cool outro thing. i don't know how much i like all the religious references in the second chorus, but that's just me being nit-picky and bitchy. i think we could really make that outro thing start out soft and build to a kick ass height. maybe we should dedicated our efforts right now to recording this new song and paper thin. any thoughts?

1 comment:

micah said...

Nate,

Im glad you liked " Once Upon A Time". Thanks for listening to it. I am not against changing the second verse. I think that the outro should have some vocal layers with both of our vocals on it. What are your thoughts on that ? Also, the scratch track doesnt seem complete to me. I think there needs to be a little more work on the arrangement. As far as the outro do you like the dual low end vrs. higher pitch vocals. I think that the chorus could go over outro as well...What do you think ? In my head I heard your piano being in the forefront as a driving force. I picture Jesse's guitar adding missing accents and showcasing/ leading at some points. I take it that you really didnt care for " Like the Wolves"? That's o.k. just tell me man. I can take the hate. Your not bitchy. You just hate Jesus. I get it. ( just kidding). Well tell me your ideas. I dont think the scratch track is the final form. I think we can put together something a lot more solid but I did make sure to add some " Pop Sensibility."

Micah