Sunday, June 29, 2008

Paperback Sci-Fi

Here is the song, Paperback sci-Fi. I know my singing sucks I'm not worried about that but hopefully the melody is decent? Let me know what you think and lets decide on a final line up of songs for this project asap. I'm thinking 2-4 songs right? Also I've got a second overlaying guitar part worked out for the verse of the song but no way to really record it until I get Sonar figured out. Oh and you won't hurt my feelings if your not impressed it's really only like my second venture at song writing so maybe use constructive criticism if you hate it? Revised lyrics are underneath the video.



Paperback Sci-Fi

My tired heart is dressed in red
My tired heart is dressed in love
Like paperback sci-fi I know this isn't real
I turn the pages but I can't beleive the lies

I'm sorry susan, I'm so damn sorry (x4)

My tired heart is dressed in red
My tired heart is dressed in love and razor wire
There is a gear inside my stomach
And when it turns there is perfect motion

I'm sorry susan, I'm so damn sorry (x4)

I'll dress in Red for the funeral.
I'll Sing this dirge for all of us.

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